What goes in must come out!

What would happen

if the space

we live in

was filled?

In the news today

everyone woke up

to find eight more

planets in our solar system.

Apparently, the black hole

that consumes galaxies and planets

has a alimentary digestive tract

that leads straight down

to our solar system.

Basically this means

the black hole has had

a bowel movement,

and planets are like

sweet corn kernels

that just pass on through

and there's no paper in sight.

What a mess!

Reviews

[Pete]

lol. ugh, i'd hate to see what happens if it ever got diarrhea.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Pete.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant. I like the humor too.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Thomas

[Tom]

Lol.. wonderful wry humour here, yup, our once beautiful blue planet now suffocates, perhaps that stellar black hole along with us humans are very much in cohoots together, evacuating rubbish all over earth and even further afield...

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Tom.

[Sami Khalil]

Title summed it up marvelously; even in space, black holes play that role; none or nothing can escape including light.
Wow! You are becoming a scientist!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Andrew.

[emmajoygreen]

Oh you!!!!! Just as I was eating my honey toast! But, what a brilliantly clever, funny - yet warped use of knowledge! Guess you could call it a sort of an axisdental planetary adventure.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you em.

[emmajoygreen]

Forgiven, sir!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ha ha ha liking your incredible humour here