The closure.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

On you reading my mind

I tried to break your fall, but

your thoughts floated.

As you swam to shore

in your own tears

I closed my mind,

I wanted the scene

never to be repeated.

© 2020 andrew mitchell

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jacob erin-cilberto

this reminds me of the guilt and sorrow felt at a breakup...when we are the one who has to end it...and the hurt it causes.
nicely done, andrew,
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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