The seasons of change.

While the summer of you
had you lying bare,
the winter of me
had you feeling cold.
So autumn me this,
I am falling for you,
but in the spring of you,
I found you left me.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the use of seasons here...but especially the line "So autumn me this"
Like the Riddler in Batman...but fitting so poetically in this magical piece.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Jacob, yes the Riddler did say that. Its funny I write things in the night and somewhere in the mind my line originated from Batman which I watched as a kid.

[barleygirl]

This sounds about like the lifespan of my typical romances over my lifetime. In my youth, living by a recreational lake, with the influx of tourist & all that bare skin, I always found some irresistible squeeze for the summer, but when summer ended, all the flippant promises, but sizzle turns to frazzle like your word-witty poem depicts (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[andrew mitchell]

But were romances back then just that fleeting moments but their was no real despair, just wounded egos we were all under the impression youth would last longer than it did sadly! Appreciate your visit Margie. Thank you.