Confined to the matter of time.

Time and space

both undetectable,

and yet we place

our short lives

attuned with time

to fill some space

so that we can

be fulfilled with

our allotted time.

During this period

of course, we changed,

but without time

we would have still

changed anyway.

Give me the place

that time forgot!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"to fill some space
so that we can
be fulfilled with
our allotted time."

[Sami Khalil]

You write timely in a spatial manner. You are competing with Einstein on space time continuum. Your time has come to put all your critics in their place, ooops, in their space. Have you booked your next flight on Space-X. Elon needs more money and is going crazy. Hehehe...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I seem to relate to this...my idea is to be different...there are many places time forgot,
and many people...let's remember.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Time, we cannot control. We learn. Can return to the same place we left. I liked the desire in the words Andrew. Would be nice to clean of disappointment and be brave again. I hope you are doing well. Have some fun and be safe. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote