Hear! Hear! In a consortium maze of thoughts.

Within the walls

lies mind's castle

intellectual ruins

once the roof of the world

now views the sky.

The windows have opened,

the thoughts have flown

leaving just memories buried

where words are lost

on stories over the edge.

Words travel on thoughts

as thoughts travel on words

where meanings are found

centre stage.

Words gather around.

Okay places everyone

and remember your lines.

Softly walks the love 

gently treading on hearts

most needed

leaving footprints

not forgotten.

Who cut the heart

that drained the love

to be stored in time's capsule

until Cupid's next visit

where the arrow

will shoot truly?

Was it Cupid?

Wisdom speaks

when the need

for knowledge

is hungry.

He who sits

on time's chair

will inevitably

lose his throne.

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting reference sin the poem I enjoyed it!

[Chris Shaw]

I don't know how I managed to get out of your maze of words. I thought I was stuck in there forever. Reminded me of Hampton Court Maze many years ago. It nearly drove me nuts:)

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

I might have to clip this maze it didn’t work as I wanted it too. You win some you lose some as they say. Thanks for reading though Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

I probably should have had a glass of wine first and then read it. My brain may have got into gear by then :)

[andrew mitchell]

It would be easier for me to unpublished this I think lol.

[barleygirl]

Your maze of thoughts zeroes in on very relatable stuff ("intellectual ruins" . . . "thoughts have flown" . . . "footprints not forgotten") . . . but I am not catching the overall drift of your storyline & maybe this is to be expected when walking thru a maze! This feels like the random disconnected stuff that flows thru old synapses during an idle bit of pondering (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[andrew mitchell]

Haha I walked through a maze once and each dead end had a proverb or a message to learn, I tried to emulate this by just stating the title just wasn’t clever enough to pull it off. I think I will dissect and make it less disconnected which you are right. Thanks for trying .:)