Walking that mile.

Walking that mile.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

There are two paths in life
the life you lead
and the life you
could have lead.
There are holes
you made
and holes you filled.
There is the air
that you breathe
and the air
you won’t breathe.
You have a beginning
you will be shown
the end.

© 2020 andrew mitchell


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You see the snake is eating his tail and he does so for eternity. A perpetual motion reptile, like this poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Well, that's just the way it is. I try not to resist it. Actually, though, I'd like to have a non-traumatic NDE so I can hit the ground running after the end.

Posted 5 Years Ago


dearest Andrew... somehow I feel that our Spirit will
live on... in some form or person. Life is awesome
and we are intricately made. Life is quite a Journey
for our Spirit... we will enjoy each other and Nature...
the sky with it's moods unfolding... the sun and moon in
all it's degrees and phases. gently, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


oh my goodness ... relateable no doubt .. and your closing is quite the shocker .. yes indeed .. we will all be shown the end ... there is an ironic humor in that ... and truthfully made me laugh a bit .. at me self. some thing we will not control ;)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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