On the tides of thought.

In an ocean of love
lies the cruel sea
and a drowning.
I heard you shouting
I was too tired to respond
sometimes the bad guys win.
When the water was siphoned
many shells of broken hearts
were found alongside
bent cupid’s arrows.
On the blank canvas
a heart was wanted
no one replied
the canvas hangs empty.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Are you competing with Jacob? This was like his style. Very moving sir Andrew."When the water was siphoned
many shells of broken hearts
were found alongside
bent cupid’s arrows.:"

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you King Sami, I’m honoured to be compared to Jacob but I think I’m 20,000 leagues behind the might of J’s writes. I swim pass his works in awe.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. You are welcome emperor Andrew.
I like this poem a lot though...