It's common now, there's no sense.

We all lost our edge

finding out the world

was round.

For the people,

the consequences followed:

the world that made sense

became the world that

made no sense,

and the world changed

from that day forward.

For those who

had common sense

now became

just commoners

minus the sense.

It's just all senseless.

Okay! Robots go back

to your phone texting.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sorry, andrew, I would have commented on this poem.
But I am too busy texting to stop and have a taste of real life.

I am sure your words are good though...how about texting them to me?

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks J I will text them to you. ;)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew... you speak a language that lingers
on a page where once there were happy notes...
but now the music is melancholy when there may be
troubled times for mankind. We hold a Key to unlock
every door to every heart... if only we Believe...
tenderly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for a lovely review Pat.