You awoke on my paper.

Your mattress, my paper
in which I drew
my own conclusions.
Some verses under covers
were read succinctly,
others were brushed aside
hurriedly, when things got heated,
and the ink of my love
began to run.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

The sensuality comes through, Andrew. Better watch that ink, though. It's a b***h to wash out. ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Yes especially if it’s tattooed ink lol. Thanks for the smile Kelly. I was really just mucking around with this one like most of my stuff :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mmmm and we are not talking about writing here at all are we?

Or maybe a writing on the skin...let's hope we have enough ink so that we can stay under the covers and not have to go out to the store to buy more.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

I don’t know what I wanted this poem to be in imagery, I just let the flow take me. I wanted the write to be metaphorical on love of the female form. It was just a shot in the dark! Thanks J.

[Sami Khalil]

This had a tinge of smart sexuality to it. Very clever play on words.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Sami, not really good at these writes lol.but to play is fun.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. You are welcome...