The perception-analyst.

The perception- analyst
had the notion,
No! not a potion
that love made
the world go round,
but turned out to be
a misconception .
On reflection
it seemed
a complete deception,
but there were
those who believed,
just like those
who said the earth
was flat.
Gravitational love!
Go on take it for a spin!
But beware of
latitude and longitude
you may get
your lines crossed.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

AMAzing use of several metaphors here
So clever
Cheers to this write and love ❤️ May it make the world spin round

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i've done the lines crossed enough times to feel this one.

Lots of fun to read the clever rhymes.

j.