Everything is okay, really!

The earth decides

to go flat,

a shadow spooked

walks only

in the light,

thoughts stampede

the cranial chamber,

to attend

a museum of verses sale,

on the grammar trail

of punctuation

commas and full-stops

go on strike

as the twelve

on the clock

goes missing,

outside clouds gather

accumulating to nothing,

the man in the moon

does a runner,

the sun too tired

doesn't show up,

and the stars shine

as strobe lights

leave a Morse code message,

all the while

the looking glass mirror

becomes a hearing aid.

However don't despair,

all is well,

the chaos theory

becomes orderly.

Reviews

[Neville]

as a long standing proponent of chaos theory .. my head is spinning because I'm imagining the sound of huge old trees falling all around me and there are none to be seen for yards .. I know what I mean anyway ..

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thanks Nev :)))))))))))

[emmajoy]

Could be.. who knows! Seems heaven and hell are rebelling at present. Your upside downing and arounding reads almost sane, here, Andrew.. and reading a second time, certain phrases are near
plausible.

' .. commas and full-stops - go on strike - as the twelve - on the clock ' goes missing, '

If read times over, is controlled yet feverish. possibility being debated before sentence. The chaos theory still hanging by the seat of its pants. Perhaps.

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Emma, thanks for your lovely review and visit. With what’s happening now everything else looks normal lol. Hence a write grossly out of proportion.

[emmajoy]

Out of proportion could be Part II, sir - what you've set above opens the way to quite a few routes of thought. Touches of philosophical debate... ?