The kiss that never was.

In shadows passing
the synchronicity
of two hearts
beating failed,
with the timing chain broken
- the kiss that never was.

Reviews

[sharleenm]

You write beautifully, I really enjoyed your poem

[andrew mitchell]

THank you poet.

[Chris Shaw]

The timing is all important. The kiss that never was may never have worked out. Those near misses have us wondering from time to time. Hope all is good Andrew.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Chris, I’m fine. I’m just experimenting beyond the norm with writing so to many it comes across as I’m mad, depressed etc. I am neither, I am good lol. I have lost my edge in writing so I’m travelling down roads others would consider suspect. I can tell from no reviews my writes

[andrew mitchell]

I can tell from no reviews on latest works, writers don’t like the road I have chosen because of no reviews but I’m just writing it’s never about me. I’m just trying to expand be it macabre lol. Hope you are ok Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Happy experimenting Andrew. Keep writing:)

[andrew mitchell]

Oh i will. Thanks for dropping by. I shall return the love soon.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have this very deal with someone very close to me.

We have been separated by states...friends at once 40 years ago...a kiss that never was but imagined by both of us.
thank you for the reminder.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob. It’s funny what might of been, so many encounters but not close enough to ignite by both parties.