What are you doing hanging around.

The thought
that followed
the lines
was a thought
that read,
which in turn
became a thought
that wouldn’t
let go
way after bed,
only to turn
it’s own
lights out.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha ..i love it sir! so relatable when one is stuck in that well enclosed circle ... over and over and over ... you know ... i just thought :) perhaps is we counted each revolution as a sheep .. we might just fall asleep ... just a thought ... the bit of rhyme is perfect in my opinion .. a bit of a surprise to me and this has a very smooth flow to it .. love and peace brother!
E.
ps. I slept most of the afternoon away and just had a cup 'a ... its almost 7:30 ... i expect I'll be up a few more hours .. hopefully the 'round and 'round will not make an appearance

[andrew mitchell]

Lol thanks for the smile Gene and the holler of laughter, it’s nice to know how we all go through those nights of over thinking.

[Einstein Noodle]

unfortunately for me I do the same in waking .. those snippets of song that go round and round and round .. arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggghhhhhh!

[andrew mitchell]

Yes that too lol

[barleygirl]

My mind has a bad habit of caging thoughts that then go round & round! (((HUGS)))

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Margie.

[Ruth]

And when that happens, sleep becomes a dream in its own right lol I do like your talent at inviting the reader right into your poetry :)

[andrew mitchell]

You are so kind Ruth, thank you cos I have a talent to turn readers away too lol.