A walk through the stars.

On the shores of time
I lost my watch
in the movement -
nothing stands still.
A walk through the stars
I tripped over the cosmos
and here I am
worshiping the sun
and the moon.
I am life.

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Your opening line commands the reader to listen. This is both smooth and beautiful.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Cherrie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and with life, who really needs time....our time will stop when it will...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob, to think in 3 billion years the sun will burn out and it’s taken 30 billion years for us to arrive according to Brian Cox. Our whole existence is a moment in passing.

[Patricia Wedel]

And it takes a trillion dollars or more to increase inflation... but we always have the Stars to walk through. when the "Time" is half past Blue. gently, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Half past blue, I like that.

[Sami Khalil]

Very, very poetic and lovely Emperor Andrew. You are indeed a star walking brightly.
You walk the walk and talk the talk, in honesty and wisdom.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you King Sami, I’m in awe of Brian Cox and his scientific knowledge of the universe.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I need to check him out. You are welcome sir...

[andrew mitchell]

Check out his documentary dvds, pure excellence.your excellency. It’s fascinating.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr......

[Zoe Richardson]

"On the shores of time, I lost my watch..." What an awesome beginning! That sounds exactly like something I would do. We get twisted up in the machinations of the universe, don't we? Dropping our watches, tripping over stars, losing the keys to the future. This is so clever, and I feel like I am not the only klutz trying to maneuver the spaces between what is said and what is real!

[Zoe Richardson]

"On the shores of time, I lost my watch..." What an awesome beginning! That sounds exactly like something I would do. We get twisted up in the machinations of the universe, don't we? Dropping our watches, tripping over stars, losing the keys to the future. This is so clever, and I feel like I am not the only klutz trying to maneuver the spaces between what is said and what is real!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Zoe for a lovely review. You are no klutz and sometimes only sometimes I hit the right notes in writing. 😀