In the event I became me, myself

Shaking off his excesses, born
on the edge of a sentence,
a verse, he fell
clinging to a question mark
his weight stretched
the imagination
before which
on letting go, the circus:
swung on the quotation rings
only to land
as he would, alone
in an arena.
The energy produced
pronounced a pronoun
I
where I referred
as not only he,
but me.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

obviously, I would like this, andrew....you would expect that.
and yes, I have been a question mark all of my life.
soon i will be a period, and my sentence will end.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Hopefully later than soonerJ. I think we are all question marks at sometime or another . Glad you liked it. Thank you Jacob.

[Sami Khalil]

It will be a noticeable event indeed if we find ourselves; people can notice the difference. We have to anchor ourselves, be true to it, share some goodness as you are doing here sir Mitchell with your wonderful, creative spirit.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you King Sami, you are one of few good poets that give my Dali-esque writes a go and review .😀

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure and honor Emperor Andrew.

[Writergurl]

intriguing and interesting read, really enjoyed this

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet for your kind words and time.😀