My watch on your watch

I would give
you peace
if I knew
where to
find it.

Behind closed doors
beware of the crack
in the wall
where the light
will come in
and take away
your darkness.

I had only eyes
for the road
but the road
was too long
and I lost
sight of it.

I gave you
time so you
could live
a life,
spend
wisely.

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

as a friend said after watching the half-time Superbowl show
"there goes another wasted half-hour that I'll never get back"

[andrew mitchell]

Haha had plenty of those. Thanks Dave

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes space and breathing time is better than the most heroic of efforts. Darkness will not be forced away.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John, I agree

[Andrew John]

Rather moves me, this one.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Andrew.

[Relic]

Wow! that second verse really made me think. This is one of your best, andrew. Excellent writing. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Most kind Tim, thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we give our time to others, but time itself takes away from what we have left...spend it wisely....
a good sentiment to live by.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J for your thoughts

[Ken Simm.]

Simply beautiful and wow! Nuff said.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ken.

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow… sometimes… absence creates a Monopoly of sorts that leaves hearts at Risk and only an all encompassing heart 💜 can offer Peace. truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pat for your lovely reply.