Space invader

In the production
of space could I
be theatrical
in search of
finding what’s
out there.
Could I direct
space and where
I wanted to be
in its confines
counting the stars
along the way
kicking a moon
or two because
I could
into the universal net -
It’s a goal!
No! Probably not
it’s not my time.
I’ll leave it
to someone else.
I have my own
space to deal with-
a space within a space,
a place called home.

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Always good to know one's proper place and home. Excellent thoughts. Very wise. Nicely done, Sir.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, we all have to deal with our own space before we can invade another's.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew... when we become Spirits ... we will then have time to ponder the Stars and guide the earth beings into the atmosphere ... until then we will plant flowers and trees... grape vines and peaches... within the reach of Mankind. Your poetry has given me Wings... Behold... Spring is at your Threshold... Amen... Pat

[andrew mitchell]

As always Pat your words are too kind. Thank you Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

Kindness is a Butterfly that appears when sadness lingers on petals of tears... or even when the Sun shines and flowers bloom...' and Birds sing Clair de Lune by Debussy... Amen... Pat

[andrew mitchell]

I always liked Satie. May the petals fall upon you like butterflies.

[Sami Khalil]

At least in space, you don't get ants, termites, squirrels, rats to invade your space. You get weird-looking aliens or you might find the Russians. Lol
An excellent one as usual with too much wisdom.
Worry about your space before worrying about other's spaces or far away spaces. Worry about the near before the far. Worry as in handle not the negative connotations ofsome. Do something about it.
Long live the Emperor and not the Tzar

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind review King Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Mitchel.