The big picture in verse

At what point
did the universe think
this is the right direction
and we're just going
with the flow.
When I gave you
the stars, the sun
and the moon
for all to see.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Like asking God who died and made you centre of the universe? An excellent conumdrum of a poem.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ken.

[Sami Khalil]

I guess we all have to follow the rotation of plants and stars. The universe might be swirling too in a hoopla dance. I guess we all have to follow the laws of gravity, particles and so forth.
I guess we all have limited free wills for untold things are beyond our meager control.
Long live the Emperor!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks King Sami, apparently in time , space/ universe will disappear to nothing, as it spreads/thins out as we speak. Maybe we need another Big Bang to create a new one.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I hear some big bangs in Ukraine. You are welcome sir.

[andrew mitchell]

Those poor people of Ukraine just sacrificial lambs to be slaughtered to save mankind from nuclear war while we the west just watch on. Just doesn’t seem right really. All for one and one for all should apply! How can one fanatic be so feared and so powerful.

[Sami Khalil]

All true and well said. God help us all. You are welcome.