Closed, keep out

My home is
my castle
but the moat
is yours;
dive carefully,
a broken neck
is too quick.
Besides I don't
want you
hanging around.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Ha ha ha
Such a strange and unique poem..
Are these unwelcome guests??
Lisa, now back from Madrid..

[andrew mitchell]

Yes it’s a sarcastic poem based around
Monty Python movie the Holy Grail with the castle scene. Thanks Lisa

[Lisasview]

Oh, I do not remember that movie...although I know I saw it..
Clever poem...
Lisa

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Lisa.

[John the Baptist]

Indeed. Stand your ground! Besides, if they hang around after the neck break, the smell starts invariably in a day or so.

[andrew mitchell]

I just watched a Monty Python movie with the French castle scene in the holy Grail. And yes just as well poem’s don’t smell lol. Thanks John.