How do you like your ribs?

How do you like your ribs?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Adam!
Yes God.
How is Eve?
Well, she talks a lot,
but apart from that
she’s ok.
Well, if you give me
another rib
I can make another.
What about....
I give you
my little toe?
Adam, you don’t
wanna go there.

© 2022 andrew mitchell


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This is the first original gossip. Many may not know that women didn't start the act of talking behind someone's back. It all began with Adam and God, which we can see the relevance into today's world. Where this action continues and shapes the idiocy of modern society and their beliefs and law making. It's always gotta be about them. Men, of course. A nice bit of hilarity in this piece. Nice work Andrew.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Carlos.



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Losing a rib, or a toe, for a second wife? I love my wife, but I don't want another one, thanks! lol! You brightened my day with this fun write, Andrew!

Posted 3 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

THank you Robert and your comment made me laugh, the understandings between husbands I know what you.. read more
Ha! I enjoyed reading this funny little ditty a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Thanks Richard.😀
Very funny Andrew..but then again we all know you can be hysterical..
Going for the rib notion was so very clever..
A little story....loved it early this morning in lovely Spain,
Lisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lisa.
Lisasview

3 Years Ago

You are so welcome..
Lisa
This is the first original gossip. Many may not know that women didn't start the act of talking behind someone's back. It all began with Adam and God, which we can see the relevance into today's world. Where this action continues and shapes the idiocy of modern society and their beliefs and law making. It's always gotta be about them. Men, of course. A nice bit of hilarity in this piece. Nice work Andrew.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Carlos.
Hehehe! You are funny even in questioning a serious matter. I thought about those things for they are hard to make sense. Take care my friend. The rib might mean DNA for people for people did not have a clue about it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Thank you King Sami.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Emperor Andrew.
You know Andrew I never could get my head round the Adam's rib thing in Sunday school :) These days barbequeued ribs are far more to my liking:)Talking of which, we do have lovely weather right now. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

Me too! Thanks Chris, enjoy your fine weather.

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Added on May 8, 2022
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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