Transmissions acoustic, of course!

And did those feet
from ancient time
use the doormat?

Knock! Knock!
Oh God!
What can the matter be?

How great thou art
but your faith
has blinded you.
I see the stars
from the blow
I received
to the back
of my head.

Adam, it’s getting
cold in here.
Well, put another
fig leaf on Eve!

And God read
this little dittty
of a poem
as he always does
and replied.
Not hymn!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever play on words here, andrew.
a smile.

yes, it got suddenly very cold in Paradise.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for stopping by and digesting.

[Lisasview]

Oh my goodness, another delightful to~ set my day ~ in a cheerful way...
Loved it..
I see you have 22 views and I am your only review.. Shame on those readers that are too lazy..
Lisa, getting reading to take a piano lesson 7:30am here

[andrew mitchell]

You are too kind Lisa. Thank you for reviewing and stopping by. My opinion on my writes not getting reviewed are they are not everyone’s cup of tea, not up to standard and not real poetry to the purists. When you read some fine writers of poetry here on WC, they get reviews because their work is excellent, the standards are high and are true poets of poetry. I just write for fun and deliberately off the grid stuff lol. So I think people can’t help but stop by just to see what bizarre write have I done this time out of curiosity and then quickly move on lol.😀

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
I agree with you, but I also think titles are very important.. A title can actually make someone want to read your work and if there many people reading your work then you are bound to get more reviews.
I named one of my earlier poems G and got quite a few reviews because many said they were enticed by the G alone...
Just a thought...
Lisa