Pouring wine on the grapevine

Hey Eve, these fig leaves
are so clean and soft.
What did you do?
I decided to do a stonewash.

Anything on the Sky channel tonight?
Just some futuristic drama
about the resurrection of Jesus Christ.
I think it’s a repeat.

Any post today?
Oh, just another God message:
Don’t pick the apples!
Not more junk mail again.

Eve darling, I’m getting hungry.
What’s for dinner?
Tonight, we are having spare ribs.
Oh!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An amusing update on the Adam and Eve story. A fun write Andrew. Made me smile:)

Chris

[Lisasview]

Hi Andrew,
Another funny post of yours to make me laugh aloud..
Loved it..
I have tiny bit of critic...hope you do not mind?? If so just ignore me.
I feel that lines 4 and 5 might be better connected to one line... as it would read better.
Actually, I see this on verse 1, line 4 and 5 might be better connected into one line and verse 4 Lines 3 and 4 might begetter connected... as the Oh... on the final line would read better. Basically each verse being 4 lines..if that makes sense...
Enjoyed,
Lisa

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for the advice Lisa I will make changes.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome...as I said this is just me speaking and I am no expert...