It's just phonetics

Are you a good poem
or a bad poem
you ask yourself.
Depends on how much
coffee you've had,
be it consumed.
When the poem
awakes from deep sleep
and the flow of words
blows your way...
a new spark ignites
an old flame -
an unfinished symphony,
a poetic impulse
online outward bound
starting a sonority.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

The poem awakens like the big bang, at least for me. This is so true, the spark of inspiration ignites the fire of the poet's need to write and within the pyre, a poem self creates

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much softlyfall.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I don't like coffee, so I think I will let my poem drink it.

[andrew mitchell]

I know you don’t like coffee and I was expecting a comment along those lines lol.