The artist of the universe

On climbing her rainbow
I fell into her pot of gold.
Next time take a ladder they said.
So I said to they
mind your own pastels.
They said move
or we will crayon you.
I said not with my eraser, you won’t.
Now with everyone blank
I said I told you so
and I picked up my universe
and left.
Don’t mess with a black hole.

Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

If I could fall into a pot of gold then a ladder is quite useless, if only the madding din could be blotted out and much more the willingness of too many to throw themselves into the fray! I much prefer as suggested in this poem to go my own pace and colour outside the lines as I well please. Thanks for sharing Andrew!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is funny and clever...and I do not want to get on the bad side of this crayon wielding artist.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J.

[softlyfall]

LOl, back away from the hole dudes lol
I live in a portable bubble universe too! We should float off somewhere some time

[andrew mitchell]

Apart from restaurants I don’t like the rat race anymore I prefer to be wth nature enjoying the peace and solitude and even taking in the elements. I love watching the rain. Thank you for your kind words Amy.