The transparency of it all!

Sometimes we try
to be transparent
but what if we looked
utterly transparently clear.

Hello! By George!
Your liver doesn’t look healthy.

Excuse me miss,
you should give up smoking
have you seen your lungs lately?

If my eyes didn’t deceive me
I’d say you’ve got
writers block on the brain.
It’s quite visible you know.

Hello dear, I think
your uterus and cervix
is having a prolapse.



Yes, we love to hide
behind our clothes
to cover up
our imperfections
even our thoughts
lack transparency.

Yes, in the new
evolution of man
we will have no need
for writing thoughts to paper
because we have
cut through the chase
and now we read minds.

Yes! I can see clearly now
your appendix is about to rupture
and your mind needs
a spring clean -
you have dirty thoughts.

Reviews

[keith]

the who would sing ... 'i can see for miles and miles'
'no ... it's not the dress that ... '
'really? ... it's your candidates STUPID!'
do ya think jim jordan has a crush on hunter?
YES! RUN DONNIE RUN! 2024! ... yeah run dumbass RUN!
is the gop grooming jr? he certainly got dumbass heckling insults down?

transparency ... YES I HAVE THOUGHTS!

good natured write without insulting the masses
how do you do that?
the polite fancy word for transparency is candor

there is something very unique in your writes

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Keith for your words. Just a silly write really for my muse.

[keith]

muse ... better part of aMUSEment