It’s a long way to eternity

I felt the Earth move
but she didn’t flinch.
Oh well!

Man in suitcase
not necessarily
travelling.
He’s dead.

I couldn’t read
tea leaves.
Too much milk.

I came across
a wishing well…
must be a well.

She gave me
the eye
I thought
I was in
then it hit me
I’m blind
in her eye.

Read the signs
please is hello
thank you is
goodbye.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you is goodbye.
It has been nice knowing you even though I didn't know you at all.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Especially the way a woman says it lol

[Scott Kris]

Confusing isn’t it. Ha.
Good humor and a delightful debate of perception.

Scott.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Scott just little ditties of comedy one liners or an attempt.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thoughts to keep in mind next time I'm out and about!

[andrew mitchell]

Just a comedy attempt with one liners Frederick. I couldn’t expand on each line so it’s a conglomerate of sorts.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Neatly strung along like a motley crew.