The echo  of yesterday

The echo of yesterday

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The goodbye
had no forwarding address
maybe I misread
the hello
hello,hello,hello.

© 2024 andrew mitchell


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Oh my always quite a pleasure to read what you are writing and thinking... Yes, sadly the goodbyes often do not leave a forwarding address.. (at the end of their lives)
Lisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


Goodbyes say it all, tossing the ball into the unknown, no goal.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the idea of goodbyes have echoes; they reverberate many effects.
HNY my good mate.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

You too my friend.
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Yes siiiirrrr. Gracie Mille
Oh hey! Now that packed quite a pinch and a punch there Andrew! 👍🏻👍🏻 Happy new year mate 🥳🎉

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Happy New Year Red
redd Brick Keshner

1 Year Ago

. . . 🥳🎉😊
When we call into the abyss of loss ... our words to echo sharply. Wonderful piece of brevity.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you Pryde. HNY
Most people are happy to tell good bye than hello. Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you Arundass
If they whispered, you were probably off base.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thanks John. HNY
I have gotten those before...unfortunately once from a dear friend...

by the time I found her again, she had passed away from ALS.....

but I keep saying hello to her hoping she may eventually answer.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thanks J. HNY.
Andres,
At seventy-five, I feel like I am just a warehouse for all the good-byes I've not already delivered,livered, ivered, verddddd,
Vol

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thanks Vol. HNY

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..