Tomorrow never comes but years do

In the space
of yesterday
I found myself
travelling today
never reaching
tomorrow.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love this short piece, very insightful, space is very small from where we stand. But yesterday is gone and time is long, we travel today not knowing will reach tomorrow. Then its to late.
Thank you for sharing.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Mauricio

[Mauricio Montoya]

Ur welcome, good read.

[Lara]

A winding road of ever decreasing loops. (And its not even Canberra).
I know that road...
Very clever write, andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Lara, a lovely review.

[Betty Hermelee]

time has a way of playing with age….its one foot forward and one back, like-a treadmill…however…despite all that we do seem to take a step forward when we age, though slowly….years definitely come one step at a time….even though is tomorrow may not…..
warmly,B🌷🌷🌷🌷

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Betty for your words.

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure Andrew
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷

[Sami Khalil]

Don't travel to the U.S. I tell the world , Don't travel to the US while Orangee is in office.

[andrew mitchell]

With the damage Trump is doing, who can afford to go to the USA. Everyone’s superannuation is taking a dive and with tariffs hitting our meat industry our meat could double in our country.😡

[Sami Khalil]

I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you dumb orangee....

[Inkspire]

Short and simple .
We never reach tomorrow. Tomorrow always has to wait.

[Lynda Logan]

The author exhibits an outstanding mastery of language, skillfully merging narrative techniques with deep thematic exploration. The integration of symbolism and imagery not only enriches the story but also encourages readers to explore its underlying meanings. The pacing is finely tuned, creating a narrative that builds tension effectively, while the character development remains complex and convincing.

[andrew mitchell]

What can I say Christina, if only I could write as well as this professional review. I am flattered to say the least particularly when there are so many excellent writers on this site than I. Thank you very much.

[Lynda Logan]

Hey there, fellow writer! If you’re looking to polish your work, refine your story, or just make sure everything reads smoothly, I’m here to help as your beta reader, proofreader, and editor. Let’s work together to make your writing shine!

[Lynda Logan]

And if you have anything to work on either from your book or anything other else, I hope I am qualified to assist you with that sir.
Looking forward to having you more.

[Dorian]

A poem full of thoughts. Valuable and meaningful.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Dorian for your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

Touche
Touche
Touche.........

[andrew mitchell]

Touché Sami touché!

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe.......

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That's true. Seriously, wow!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Beren for your kind words.