The longevity from birth states

How long do I have, time?
I cannot answer that
for I am only a word
not a sentence.

Reviews

[RomaJ]

Andrew, I love how clever and playful this poem is! The idea of being ‘only a word, not a sentence’ made me chuckle, but it also sneaks in a deeper reflection on perspective and limits. It’s witty and surprisingly profound.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Roma, you got it.

[Ayesha Faiz]

This is a beautiful and deep little poem. It shows that "time" itself doesn't have all the answers, it’s just a part of something bigger. Very thoughtful and creative!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ayesha for your kind words.