Goodbye

So this is about an old friend who I have written about before if you remember one of my better poems that I did awhile back called he is with you.

I'm falling down
And here you are screaming in my face
Telling me these things
These lies that I believe
You hurt me
And I'm sorry
But I can't deal with you anymore
You were my friend
But you kept tearing me down
You made me more broken then I was
Now your back again
Trying to make things right
But you are still tearing me down
With every word you say
My heart breaks a little
My spirit dies
So I'm sorry
But I can't deal with this anymore
I'm done trying to fix you
When all you do is break me
So goodbye

Reviews

[Heartful5160]

I've had this problem, actually not too long ago. We were best friends for about two years and she was a jealous type, didn't want me to be friends with anyone else, so I quite talking to her. I tried everything I could to be friends with her again, but now I feel like I was the one that hurt her. But I'm sure some people have had this issue before and I'm not the only one. But nice job.

[Julia Mars]

Good one... ..