Kiss (A Cinquain)

 

 

 

Your kiss
The dark shadow
between your open lips
or the mouth surrounding it gives
pleasure

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Wow. Simple, powerful, visual, sensual, seductive...
Excellent job!

[jen -- JG]

this is something I've never tried, but seeing how well you have done it here makes me want to try.

very descriptive and sensual and I can see where it could easily turn into the 6 word poem.

well done.

jen-JG