Vice

This is pure fiction! —I don't believe in Demons or Satan.

Vice

(Pure fiction)

Who do you think you are?

You are no morning star.

You live in the night,

Are only suited for fight.

The blood is on your hands

You create more death than Death-Metal bands.

Worse than any Satanist,

Doing nothing good

But still a Catalyst.

You are the one who takes.

Not the one who makes.

The world is at your toes,

Together with your worshipping hoes.

They praise the blood,

You are causing to flood.

You are no rescuing elf,

But Lucifer himself.

The father of demons,

Having the power of Eons.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[de_maruf]

demon with eon's power,
still a catalyst,
i am impressed with the thought

outstanding one
thank's for share it

[zainul]

Great write
Enjoyed reading

[Steven Cash]

This is very good.

But by virtue, if good exists, evil must exist.

Just a thought

[Amanda J. S.]

You are right :-) (as you can read in the information bar: this is pure fiction) :-)

[Steven Cash]

Yea :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

don't believe in the devil either, but he makes for a great poetry subject..I liked this..Because he is in the minds of so many he has clearly become the catalyst of destruction

[Amanda J. S.]

Precisely!
Glad you liked it!

[Caradoc]

This is a nice little poem. I very much like that you use the title of morning star in this piece. There haven't been to many poems lately, that I've read, that deal with this subject. Have you read Milton's work?

-Caradoc

[Amanda J. S.]

Tank you! I'm glad you liked it :-)

Nope, I haven't read Milton's work... Is it good? :-)

[Caradoc]

Very good. I recommend reading Paradise Lost. It's one of the books that made John Milton famous. It tells of the fall of Adam and Eve from the Garden of Eden and how Lucifer, the Devil, isn't that bad of a guy. You should check it out from your local library.