All Around

A short poem after a short conversation with a loved one

All Around

You told me that sometimes you wish

You were not a woman,

Because of what you are expected to do,

And how you did it wrong.

But would you rather be a man,

Telling a woman what to do,

Or wish for something better,

All around?

Reviews

[Light and ashes]

interesting perspective, like very much.

[emmajoygreen]

A gentle poetic tale told with more unsaid between living, loving people. Something better is being who and what one feels. Surely?.

[Amanda Renee]

thank you for you insight as always