Autumn

Autumn is finally falling,

But I will try to hold on  

To its beautiful

Colors.

Reviews

[Pete]

the climax of a growing season. i think we all try to hold onto it to get us through winter. nicely done and much enjoyed.

[Thomas W Case]

You paint this picture so well.

[Amanda Renee]

Thank you so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I would like to hang on to them as well.
Lovely poem....did you mean to use "its" possessive...?
I like how the poem seems to fall, going from multi-word lines down to two and then one
at the end.
j.

[Amanda Renee]

Thank you so much for your review, I'm not the best with grammar rules, hopefully i edited it correctly, let me know and thank you;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, you did, Amanda.

[Amanda Renee]

Thank you!