Water Haiku

The Clouds get heavy

Water molecules gather

And rain down on me

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

A haiku for rain. Suits me just fine! Nice to meet you, Amanda!

[Pete]

nicely done. too bad i never have an umbrella with me when i need one.

[Chris Shaw]

Visually beautiful Amanda. A cloud burst. I saw it unfold in slow motion. Much enjoyed.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

The water cycle is relatable to us. We are mostly water.

Nice haiku amanda

[Einstein Noodle]

wonderful .. all the right stuff of a Haiku says i .. so simple yet full of sparks to ignite my feelings and imagination .. "molecules" ... how great is that in this poem!!! :)
E.

[Dylan Macadham]

Bravo Amanda! A Sky Haiku! :)
Dylan