Fruit Flies

Fruit Flies

A Poem by Amanda Renee

I used to think that fruit flies were dead

When I found them in my glass of wine.

Then, one day (annoyed), I pulled one out of my glass,

And watched one on the tip of my finger-

Flapping it wings and flitting away-

© 2025 Amanda Renee


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Gettin' nature hammered over there i see

Posted 8 Months Ago


Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

I bet you do Amanda. You should pursue that link on public animal feeding I shared with you. It's .. read more
Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

this one... watch this before you go to sleep.
After you will be prone to dream instead o.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

(no promises) I promise
Hearts can be like fruit flies...we might have annoying heartbreak and feel dead from it...and then suddenly flap our wings and fly away to a new situation that can make us live again.
Love the metaphor.

j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Amanda Renee

9 Months Ago

Thank you J., I love your analysis!

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Added on April 15, 2025
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Amanda Renee
Amanda Renee

New York, NY



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53 year old Middle School English Teacher (19 years in the beloved Bronx, N.Y.) who loves the arts (in all of it's forms) more..