Watching Weather

Watching weather through a window,

I have no place to go,

But I can see it, sunshine, ice and snow.

 

Watching weather through a window,

From the chambers of this bed,

And the silhouette of the shadows

On the ceiling ahead. 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

BTW...feel free to stop by and review one of mine.....it's good to get feedback here on the Cafe and we're a friendly bunch mostly...:)

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[Buddhistboy73]

Short but interesting write here..:)

Through the window one can see many sights...kind of marvelling at the sight of nature through the window...
Im intrigued by the line about the chambers though...for me this is where it feels kind of dark.....and that the writer may be actually enchained by their circumstances...

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[Pete]

i love it and so much better than the news or reruns. my favorite hobby that never gets old. cleverly done and well said.