These Computers!

Beside the mucky table typing,

On the sweaty keyboard riding,

With aching fingers shivering about,

And bloodshed eyes popping out

They work on these computers!

They work as students, clerks and tutors

Then slowly the screen starts flickering,

But they! They keep on clicking,

They click images, they click the text

They click folders and whatever next!

Now they are lost, into the band

Of those little letters at hand

No heed they pay to others,

Be it younger or elders

No wonder why don’t they hear us?

They work on these computers!

----------- Amar laksh

Reviews

[Transience]

damnable are those comps,aren't they....well really hypocritical of me since am typing this very instant on that hellish contraption. lol.

[amarlaksh]

sure they are!!! lol!!

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Witty & fun :-) !
*pat

[de_maruf]

fine

[DIVYA]

So true. Dead to the world! But I wouldn't know where to go without it...And can a similar comment be made about TV?
A comment very effectively put across!
Give us more such! Regards, DN

[Tarry Franck]

Really enjoyed reading this :) So true Good job

[Annabelle Lee]

its very carefree and the rhyme is clever. nicely done

[quinfinn]

this is my favorite yet! you should write in this witty and playful style much more often. i truly think that this may be your niche in poetry. wonderful!

[Dr. Wood ?]

guilty as charged..Great poem

[Zacnethen]

Lovely poem

[amarlaksh]

thank you

[luviva]

thats just true.... they spend their time typing away on computers which was not the case a 100 years ago!!
its great i enjoyed it..!!