Today..

Its all emotions.... it happened today only....i will always love u....

Today...

today I proposed to my love,

still I am not happy,

had met yesterday,

fell in love, deep tender love,

didnt noticed the flow of time,

whole day sat there waiting to see that caption

“ONLINE” and I was eccentric,

no worry of tuitions nor parents

only for her the “Happiness”

people told me she was out of my league

petrified as I told my friend,

now I made my mind up,

she should not know about this from others

thats why I told her, and got away

today I experienced my First and maybe last love.....

----- Amar laksh

Author's Note

mind my errors today felllas

Reviews

[Monster ^.^]

What a quick love! It creates a character who isn't able to fight for their want! Why is that so? :) But I somehow got confused if some lines should have been said earlier than others? Nevertheless, the message is strong! I know some people will be hit hard! :)

[Felecia]

Wow...fast huh? Love is a odd thing isn't it? I doubt anyone is out of you league, amarlaksh, just saying ahaha. Anywho, lovely poem, message was strong and clear. HAs been received my friend! Nice job

[Baby Ricochet]

Out of your league ey? You now why they told you that? Because people can't mind their own f*****g business, that's why. She's not out of your league. Nobody is. Got it? Good!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Amar, Like this very nice gentle poem about how we fall easily but in falsehoods of the internet and perhaps love is so easily confused with infatuation and desire.

[luviva]

ohhh.. yeh atleast you tried. you were brave, didnt let them guys put you down.
loved it! as they say try and fail but never fail to try!

[amarlaksh]

Thanks Luviva :)

[Salar Majak]

aaaaaawawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
you'd beter not screw this up with her!!!!!!!!!! i feel a great love going on even if i don't know you two XD but your words are amazing! you sould show her this poem my friend ^.^

[amarlaksh]

i did :)

[Salar Majak]

:D YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! good luck!!

[amarlaksh]

thANKS!!!!

[Salar Majak]

:D

[Annabelle Lee]

bravo. nice write.

[dawn aulis]

Love is blind, and could be its greatest downfall

[amarlaksh]

yes rightly said

[quinfinn]

infatuation is a fleeting fancy which can feel so very powerful on the psyche and physically as well. it is a strange thing, this chemistry inside our brains. how well i know this feeling and how well i know that even should you act upon it and get a positive response, you are setting yourself up for a very disappointing fall. you see, it is the mystery which attracts and the familiarity which repels in a new "venue"....try as you may, neither of you can defy those unwritten laws....i love this write, it is a perfect representation of the nuances of blind pursuit of infatuation and the many euphoric qualities thereof!

[amarlaksh]

thankd quin but this time it dawned on me :(

[quinfinn]

bon chance, my dear poetic friend

[amarlaksh]

yeah