CHRISTMAS IS HERE !!

A Festival of joy;

The season of sharing;

Rejoice and celebrate for Christmas is nearing;

The carols and the  Nativity scenes;

Colors of red and eternal green;

Turkey ,pudding cakes, candies and sweets;

Gifts bells and the lit up Christmas trees;

The good old Santa and his Reindeers

Spreading the joy with a generous streak ;

Blessed are we For the BOY of Bethlehem is here;

To look after us and wipe all our tears

MERRY XMAS !!

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

Nice imagery within this poem you capture the essence of the season well. Impressive work.

[DrD]

Joyful and light, a delight to read. Thank you for this one.

[Imelda Blackheart]

Really liked this piece! It flowed smoothly and brought many of the things most of us think of when we hear the word "Christmas" and very easily incorporated it in. I also enjoyed how you didn't forget the true meaning of Christmas, and remembered to mention the boy of Bethlehem (good job wording that, by the way). Overall, it had few mistakes and was a very enjoyable read. Nice job!

[Phillitup]

This was very good! The joy is truly spread by your poem about Christmas. You should be proud of your epic holiday cheer. This is well-written, except for the comma that Erinne S. has already mentioned...:) Nicely penned!
Best regards,

Dell

[Erinne S.]

Christmas is definitely a wonderful time of year! this was a great piece.
My only critique is... you need a comma between the words 'gifts' and 'bells'
Great job!

~Erinne

[Phillitup]

true, I noticed that as well

[Ambereen]

Merry Xmas to all my Friends on writers Cafe ! Have a Joyful and Bright Xmas !