Mirrors of The Mind

Mirrors of The Mind

A Poem by Ambereen
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This poem is inspired from a fellow Writer whose short to the point pieces i admire ! Just an attempt at the kind

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 Assessments of the Past

Reveries of the Future

Buoyant of the Present 

© 2012 Ambereen


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Very good use of words. A complete poem in 12 words. You had it all in the poem. The past, future and the present. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey...if u don't mind can i continue ur wording.......now let me figure it out....
"Assessments of the past,
reveries of the future,
buoyant of present,
but all wants evidence,
that shows & clears ur's tension,
but if it's so, then why created recession,
is that all about past,present,future's passion,
yes...coz...of u can'y fall,then u can't grow-up with ambition......."
"Past is tht what u've saw,
"Present is this wht u see,
"Future would that wht u be there.........
'so create buoyancy...,but don't forget reveries,it'll surley be in fruency...."

Posted 13 Years Ago


hey......u've merely written 3 lines,..but it covers a whole poem......
nice words......

Posted 13 Years Ago


All three things so vital for a happy and trouble-free existence! Very wisely used words there Ambereen.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice, short, apt and a perfect summarisation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Assessments, Reveries, and Buoyant: profound thought provoking words. I also like how you went into the Past, advanced into the Future and came back to the Present.

Great work with so few yet such meaningful words. I agree with your previous reviewers.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ambereen

13 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words .
Ambereen

13 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words .
nice well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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DrD
A terse embodiment of truth well written and thought out. Thanks for this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice! Even though you only used a few words, you managed to convey a whole thought across to me. What more can I say? This poem was just another example of why I love reading your work, and I applaud you for it. Keep up the good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ambereen

13 Years Ago

Thank you .... I am on cloud nine ....
well said and written

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ambereen

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A Novice to poetry and a Chartered Accountant by profession . Recently i Stumbled on the fact that i could write a few lines with ease . So here i am, i would love all suggestions and reviews from .. more..