Very good use of words. A complete poem in 12 words. You had it all in the poem. The past, future and the present. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
hey...if u don't mind can i continue ur wording.......now let me figure it out....
"Assessments of the past,
reveries of the future,
buoyant of present,
but all wants evidence,
that shows & clears ur's tension,
but if it's so, then why created recession,
is that all about past,present,future's passion,
yes...coz...of u can'y fall,then u can't grow-up with ambition......."
"Past is tht what u've saw,
"Present is this wht u see,
"Future would that wht u be there.........
'so create buoyancy...,but don't forget reveries,it'll surley be in fruency...."
Assessments, Reveries, and Buoyant: profound thought provoking words. I also like how you went into the Past, advanced into the Future and came back to the Present.
Great work with so few yet such meaningful words. I agree with your previous reviewers.
Very nice! Even though you only used a few words, you managed to convey a whole thought across to me. What more can I say? This poem was just another example of why I love reading your work, and I applaud you for it. Keep up the good write!
A Novice to poetry and a Chartered Accountant by profession . Recently i Stumbled on the fact that i could write a few lines with ease . So here i am, i would love all suggestions and reviews from .. more..