The Land of my dreams !

A few lines of a world which is a better place for living

I have dreamt  of a land

Where ends conflict

And reigns tranquility

Where hands reach out not for armaments

But to aid a fellow beings

Where women are treated equally

And Cruelty and violence against them ends

Where envy and revulsion expire

And love and brotherhood are born

That land I believe is not just a dream 

But a reality within Human reach

 

Reviews

[BL]

I am all for equal rights and we must never give up trying to achieve it, provoking and wise write

[Emberlorna]

And what an amazing land it would be.. I think we all dream of such a place now & then.. when times get hard & it feels like the world is crashing down.. Beautiful, excellent piece :}

[Kajal Gulabani]

Well... My hunt for such a holy land is on ,too. A message of peace conveyed beautifully here. Cheers

[Geon Quuin]

So basically, a utopia?

[Frieda P]

One would think, mankind is too busy being busy to notice it's demise. Nicely penned, like this one a lot.

[Chris]

Even our God(s) got "angry" and shook the "world" - I guess we need to strive as we can each life "affirming" value we hold dear.

[Writer *78*]

well done, but Im afraid with the way society is today it will be years before people come to their senses. Government as well. Overall a very good write.

[David Scott]

One correction... "But to aid 'our' fellow beings" or "a" and "being". sigular or plural...
I rather liked the poem. The read is just off cantor as to get the attention but not so much as to be a distraction.
A reality in theory alone I'm afraid. Yes, it is a part of our humanity to reach this plane, but we have other traits that will forever hold us back while we are still on this Earth, in this form...
A very nice "dream".

[Larry Dyson]

very well said ..me too! where in India do you live?