Bend and Break

I got bored, so I played around with some cliche thought and ideas. It kept my mind from wondering away too far.

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      C

                     K           

                     P

               U

         Your pride and tell me why I care.

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             WAY

           To silence, for it's my only necessity. 

HEART

           b r e a k

               Is the passion behind your passionless words.

S          O 

    Lost

             Without those naive eyes to pave my way.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your flow and form make it seem more like the thoughts that drift and dance in our minds. Vividly painted, words and sentences as brush strokes. I loved the feelings this provoked and the depth of thought. Hope all is well...