Sleeping Brown Eyes

I love you with your brown eyes

All curled up with sleep. 

I can feel a connection, yes,

Between me, and you, and your dreams. . .

We're hiding from a delirious Sun,

and running from a malevolent midnight. 

Hold steady, softer now, for we are

all curled up with sleep.

Reviews

[Kyla H]

Great feeling, the words are put together quite nicely.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

stirring subtle sweet poetic~

[Miss Coral]

Incredibly sweet piece.. love the delicacy of your words. Great write.
:)

-Coral-

[ambur]

Thank you both for your thoughts! This was just a spur of words I had written down, but I am glad they did not go to waste.

[zappy]

nice poem its really great

[Aven]

This is one of the sweetest poems I've read. A tangible yet intangible world, a carefully woven veneer of dreams and love, linked together. I liked it alot. :)