God or no God

God or no God,

It's all a game,

Only the invested play,

Only the fools win,

Only the rest lose,

The happy mourn the pain that's yet to come,

The wise suffer the anguish that they have been condemned.

Author's Note

Its my first posted poem, it may not be perfect but I hope some of you will enjoy it.

Reviews

[Tempus]

That one is really good, I like the imagery.

[K.Oakland]

I really like the feel of this poem, good tone. I wish you would expand on it. Don't shy away from details, it makes the poem more relatable.

[Kate Z.]

Thank God there is no condemnation for those who are in Christ. Thoughtful poem.