I write

Its only a few lines but I would like to think we can all relate to it, by we I mean the writer's cafe community.

I write
I write because perhaps the eye can see,
Can see what the ear couldn't hear
I write
I write So the page can carry the weight of the words,
And off my shoulders.

Author's Note

Try to ignore any grammatical mistakes, I know this one isnt exactly a masterpiece but I like the simplicity of it.

Reviews

[Robin Saxon]

Like you said one or two errors, but that's how you (as in we) improve.
Also not everything needs to be a masterpiece to be enjoyable. This is simple, uncomplicated and says what it needs to.