perhaps

I ran across this in my early writing and it made me laugh

go to hell
perhaps
there is
something
hotter
for you
there.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Érenn]

Now this is wicked(in a cool way or should I say hot?) Love the brevity of this write. Such a terrifying yet powerful way of bidding farewell to an old flame. The image of flames helped even further. I like it much ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks I wrote this when I was maybe 16.

[Érenn]

Yeah had a feeling this was one of those teenage times. ^^ The description gave me the hint though, since it said it made you laugh ^^

[Neville]

I would have been very proud if I had thought of stringing these 11 words together in the order you deliver them. Simple, to the point and so eloquently put. A fantastic and compelling little rant. Bravo my Friend, N

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you (way late)

[Neville]

Hey, what's two years between friends?

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha. When people first commented, I didn't know I was supposed to say something back.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting dismissive little angry ditty full of vitriol.

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks. a few years after.