a gruesome ballet

something buried deep and scary

Something buried
deep
trying to scratch
at the surface
she wants to let
it out
but the pain
is too much
she dances
around it
a gruesome
ballet revealing
layers of others
but the one
beneath
that is the
one she is
trying to
uncover.

Reviews

[Neville]

you are far from alone here, many of us.. if not most feel similarly, at least from time to time.. you express it elegantly.. far better than most ..... told ya I would get here in the end.... N :)

[Lyn Anderson]

wow, back in years we go. Thank you for digging in.

[Neville]

a promise is a promise

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very articulate poem describing the struggle within to identify self when life has little form or meaning.

[Lyn Anderson]

5 years - a little late in the thanks -- but hey, I just saw this.:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Better late than never. How time flies!