scent

something going bad

It smelled
sweet
like lust
and kind of
like apple pie
but
there
was
something
rotting
there
in the
underneath
something
with
teeth.

Reviews

[Neville]

Wow, hit the proverbial nail on the head with this one, short and sweet and full of bite...Delicious

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this review. You paid attention.

[highonwords]

i like this piece... the flow is excellent and its brevity superb....thank you for sharing :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much, coming from you, that means a lot

[highonwords]

i just read it again....and its is right on target....you have touched the ground here...thank you for sharing :)