Thought you could

Mornings

He could not break me
Neither could any of them
You thought you could too.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

We should uplift each other ( lovers too ) instead of breaking our wills and trying to conform others to ourselves...Give them a space of freedom so to speak...Bravo.......

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not a fan of the final line. Perhaps 'so you think you could?' Otherwise as always your crisp, descriptive verse!

[Lyn Anderson]

Hey thanks re edited something I like better

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah but I thought it a senyru so kept it to 5/7/5

[Lyn Anderson]

Right again, my brain is not working, that is why it was the way it was. Uggh

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You get their in the end as the Bishop said to the actress!

[Lydia Shutter]

A write of empowerment! This packs a punch of strong emotions....and in just three short lines. Well written. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Good question, unfortunately I have not the answer. Very cool little piece today.